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'If Elise was Evil' Finale by ~SonamynShadmaria:iconSonamynShadmaria:



WELL, THIS IS THE FINAL CHAPTER OF "If Elise was Evil".

ENJOY!!



        CHAPTER 8: The Kids Come Along and The Final battle


In the next 10 years:

                                       SonAmy


5 years after Sonic and Amy got engaged, they were married.

Sonic and Amy's son, Manny, came along 1 year later. (A/N: Yep, short for Manik.)

Two year after that: Sonic and Amy's daughter, Sonia, came along.


                                    KnucklesRouge


Knuckles proposed to Rouge at Sonic and Amy's wedding reception, and they married the next year.

Knuckles and Rouge were expecting their twins, Muscles and Lara-su, that same year. (A/N: Muscles is a nickname; Julian is his real name)


                                        ShadMaria


Shadow ended up with a blonde Hedgehog named Maria.
(A/N: Hmmm, coincidence? Nah!!)

They had a son, Kaji, came along one year before Sonic and Amy's son.

Their daughter, Marine, was born 2 years after that.


                                        TailsCream


Tails and Cream started dating.

Nothing new beside that.

                                       EggmanElise


Eggman and Elise... well, caused the same problems Eggman did before Elise came along, with one exception: Their kids.

Sonic and the others had to deal with Eggman and Elise holding a whole hospital captive because Elise was having their first child.

Fortunately, the baby, Eggmande, looked like Elise.
(A/N: 'Eggmande' is pronounced like 'Edmond' with 'Egg' instead of 'Ed')

Eggman and Elise's daughter, Elli, was born about 8.5 years after they were married.


          IN CASE YOUR CONFUSED ABOUT THE KIDS AGES:


Manny: 4  (Blue/ Amy's eyes)

Sonia: 2  (Pink/ Sonic's eyes)

Muscles & Lara-su: 4 (Red Echidna/ Rouge's eyes & White Echidna/ Knuckles eyes)

Kaji: 5  (Black/Red; blue eyes)

Marine: 2&1/2  (Black/Yellow; blue eyes)

Eggmande: 6  (Brown hair, green eyes)

Elli: 1 1/2  (Red hair, green eyes)


                     AND THE PARENTS AGES ARE:


Sonic: 25

Amy: 22

Knuckles: 26

Rouge: 27

Shadow: 27

Maria: 24

Eggman: 50+?

Elise: 27



Sonic and Amy live in a house on the edge of town.

Manny and Sonia were eating lunch while Amy did dishes a few feet away.

Sonic ran up to Amy and kissed her on the cheek.

"I'm going now." He said, quietly.

"Be careful, my darling." Amy said, sweetly.
(A/N: Like how she said it in the Japanese version of Sonic Heroes)

"I'm always careful." Sonic said with a grin, walking over to the two kids.

"That's why I always remind you." Amy said, smiling.

"Hey..." Sonic said, quietly.

"Mama's right. You can be reckless." Manny said.

"Not you too..." Sonic said, sadly.

"Go get 'em Pop!" Sonia said, loudly with both hands over her head.

"I will, Sonia. See, one of 'em's on my side." Sonic said, looking over at Amy.

"She's still young." Amy said, with a grin.

Sonic laughed quietly.

"I'll be back." He said, and ran off.


                          ON ANGEL ISLAND:


"Rouge! HELP!!!" Knuckles yelled, from another room.

Rouge laughed quietly and walked into the twins room.

Knuckles was tied up on the ground.

Muscles was sitting on Knuckles' back, pinning him to the floor.

Lara-su was rolling around on the floor beside the two, laughing hysterically.

"Get him offa' me!" Knuckles said.

Rouge laughed harder at the helpless echidna, leaning against the doorframe.

"Rouge! It's NOT funny!" Knuckles said, struggling to get up.

Lara-su and Rouge laughed harder.

"Muscles... un-untie your f-father." Rouge said, calming down slightly.

"But, MOM!" The four year old Echidna whined.

"Come on..." Rouge said, more serious.

"Okay..." Muscles said, quietly.

Muscles untied Knuckles and Knuckles stood up, dusting himself off.

"That looks like fun! My turn!!" Lara-su said, jumping on Knuckles back.

Knuckles groaned, quietly.

"Rouge! Knuckles! We have a problem!" Tails said, through a radio on Rouge wrist.

"What is it Tails?" Rouge asked, turning the volume up on the radio-band.

"Eggman's attacking the city again with near countless robots, Sonic's nowhere to be found, and Shadow's not here yet!" Tails said, worried.

"So where the third choice..." Knuckles said, sitting Lara-su down.

"Knuckles!! That's not what I meant!" Tails said, a mix of panic and anger in the teen fox's voice.

"I know, I'm kidding. We're on the way." Knuckles said, with a grin.

"What about the kids? We can't leave them here alone." Rouge said, worried.

"Uh... get a babysitter, I guess." Knuckles said, ignoring the whines of the 4-year-old twins.

"There's no time for that!" Tails said loudly, a loud crash heard in the background.

"I'll watch them!" Cream chimed in, sounding irritated.

"Alright, we're on our way." Rouge said, and picked up Lara-su.

Knuckles carried Muscles on his back.

"YAY! Let's go!" The twin echidna's said loudly, pumping their fists in the air.

"Hey, Rouge... Did you notice the tone on Cream's voice? I've NEVER heard her sound that angry." Knuckles said, a sweat-drop on the side of his head.

Rouge smiled slyly.

"She's probably mad that Eggman interrupted her date with Tails." She said.

"Cream? On a date with Tails? That's different." Knuckles said.

"HUH?! You didn't know they were dating?!" Rouge said loudly, turning her head toward Knuckles.

Knuckles shook his head, a sweat-drop on his head.

Rouge groaned, shaking her head in disbelief.

"I can't BELIEVE how OBLIVIOUS you can be!" Rouge said, loudly.

"Well EXCUSE me for being OBLIVIOUS!" Knuckles said, loudly.

Lara-su and Muscles sighed quietly, slowly shaking their heads.


                 AT SHADOW AND MARIA'S PLACE:


Marine was throwing blocks at Kaji's head, as he was trying to watch TV.

The 2-year-old had a determined look on her face, then threw 2 blocks at the same time.

Kaji groaned, quietly.

Marine threw more blocks at him.

"My patients is wearing thin..." Kaji warned, imitating Shadow.

Marine pouted and stood up.

She walked over to Kaji, who was sitting on the couch.

"You no fun!" Marine said, pointing at him.

"Hmph." Kaji said, crossing his arms and looking away.

Marine sighed and walked back to her blocks.

Maria walked into the room and picked up Marine.

"Kaji mean. Won't play." Marine said.

"You throw blocks at my head and say I'M mean?" Kaji asked.

Marine stuck her tongue out at Kaji.

"Now now, you two." Maria said, with a small smile.

Shadow came in from outside, with a worried expression on his face.

"Papa!" Marine said, jumping down from Maria's arms and running over to Shadow.

Shadow smiled slightly, rubbing the yellow/black hedgehog's head.

He turned serious, looking over at Maria.

"The Doctor's at it again." Shadow said.

Maria nodded.

"Alright. Be careful, Shadow." She said, quietly.

Shadow nodded, and ran out the door.

Kaji looked up at the door, looking a little worried.

'Normally, Dad only hears about Eggman after the fact. It's really bad if they're calling him too.' Kaji thought.


         MEANWHILE: Tails was fighting Eggman's robots.


Tails' plane flew passed several of Eggman's robots, causing them to run into each other and start sparking.

'Where are they? Cream and I can't handle these robots alone!' Tails thought.

"Tails, how're things on your end?" Cream asked over the intercom.

"So far, so bad. I'm barely making a dent in the number of robots here. What about with you?" Tails said, trying not to sound worried.

"About the same as you, it sounds like. Where are Rouge-san and the others?!" Cream said, getting irritated.

"They're on there way, Cream. Tap into that childhood saint-like patients you use to have." Tails said, with a slight smile.

"Yeah, yeah..." Cream grumbled.

Tails sighed, quietly.

"She's been hanging around Amy too much." He said to himself, quietly.

"What was that?" Cream asked, getting mad again.

"Nothing." Tails said, quickly.

"Tails! How're you holding up?" Knuckles said, over the radio.

"Knuckles! Great!" Tails said, with a relieved smile.

"It's about time you got here!" Cream said, a little mad.

"Well, SOR-RY Cream, we DIDhave the kids with us, ya' know!" Knuckles said loudly, as he and Rouge landed in a dug out side of a mountain.

"Aunt Amy!" The twin echidnas said, running over to Amy.

"Hey, you two." Amy said, bending down to hug the twins.

"Hey, Muscle-head!" Manny said, popping out of nowhere.

"YOU!" Muscles yelled, pointing at the blue hedgehog.

"Yep, I'm here too." Manny said, with a cocky grin.

"No fighting you two." Amy and Rouge both said, stopping the potential fight.

"Fine." Manny and Muscles said, crossing their arms and turning away from each other.

"Where's Sonic?" Knuckles asked.

Amy shrugged, looking a little worried.

"He ran off this morning and I haven't seen him since. I paged him, but he rarely checks it like he should..." Amy said.

"We might not need him. Shadow's on the way." Rouge said.

"Yes, we will... Look at that, Eggman's ship." Tails said.

More robots came out of the giant ship.

"Oh, boy... This is bad." Knuckles said, quietly.

Rouge flipped open her wristband radio.

"Hey, Shadow..." Rouge said.

"What is it Rouge?" Shadow asked over the radio.

"Keep an eye out for Blundering Blue, would ya? We've got a problem." Rouge said.

"Right." Shadow said, turning off the radio.

'That idiots gone and run off again. Just when we need him too.' He thought, making a mental note to pound on him for disappearing like this.


        MEANWHILE: Sonic FINALLY got the messages.


"Uh-oh... Amy's gonna be mad now..." He said to himself, and ran in the opposite direction of where he'd been going.


            MEANWHILE: On Eggman's ship.


A baby was crying.

"Calm down Elli, it's okay." Elise said, bouncing the infant girl.

"Not again..." Eggmande mumbled.

The 6 year old slumped down in his chair and covered his ears.

"I think the sound of the robots bother her." Elise said.

"Then why don't we just go home?" Eggmande asked.

"Eggmande, I can't believe your attitude! Don't you want to show Sonic and his idiotic friends who's boss?"

Eggman asked, turning toward Eggmande.

"All I care about is going home, and getting away from THAT NOISE!!!" Eggmande yelled.

Elli stopped crying instantly and fixed her brother with a glare that would put Shadow's glare to shame.

"Oooh scar-ry, shrimp." Eggmande said.

Elli groaned, quietly.

The 1& 1/2 girl pointed at Eggmande.

"Eat." She said.

A pink saint Bernard size robot dog came out of nowhere and pounced on Eggmande.

"WHAT THE-?! What IS this thing?!" Eggmande said, starting to run.

"HAHA!" Elli said, loudly.

"Elli, did you tamper with Fuchsia’s programming again?" Elise asked.

Elli giggled quietly.

"That's my girl." Eggman said, with a wide grin, taking Elli from Elise.


                  MEANWHILE:


Shadow arrived as Knuckles toppled 2 robots at once.

"Whoa..." Shadow said quietly, looking at the near countless group of robots.

"Yeah, it's bad." Amy said, walking over to Shadow.

"Any sign of Sonic?" Cream asked over the intercom.

"Not yet. I'm sure he's on his way by now." Amy said.

"He better be... " Shadow said, quietly.


MEANWHILE: Manny and the other kids were several feet away, looking at the Robots through the window.


"That can't be good..." Manny said, looking out the window.

"No, it's not..." Muscles said.

"Isn't there something we can do?" Lara-su asked.

Manny groaned quietly, and looked over at the sleeping Sonia.

"Stay here and look after her." He said, and ran off.

"Manny! Get back here!" Muscles said, loudly.

Manny ran down the back stairs and spotted a robot out the corner of his eye.

He quickly turned into a ball and charged at the robot, slicing the robot in half.

"That was easy." Manny said, when he landed.

"You're lucky you're so hard-headed." Kaji said, coming up out of nowhere.

"K-KAJI?! How and when did you get here? Are you here to rat me out?" Manny said.

"Are you stupid? I DO know 'Chaos Control' ya' know. And, no, I'm not planning on ratting you out. They need all the help they can get.  Even my dad's going to have trouble with these guys. Just stick with me." Kaji said.

Manny looked mad, groaning quietly, but nodded.

The two ran down the stairs, destroying the random robots who wandered back there.

Manny shot a glance at Kaji, then ran off by himself.

'I don't need to stay with Kaji like a little kid. I can handle them myself just fine!' Manny said.

"Manik! Where are you-" Kaji turned quickly, and knocked a robot over.

"Going?!" Kaji yelled, but Manny was already out of sight.

Manny ran toward the robots in the front of the building.

Rouge was spin-kicking a large red robot in the air when she saw Manny headed her direction.

"Manik?! What is he- ARGH!" Rouge said loudly as the robot grabbed her.

"What's the matter, Rouge?" Tails asked, over the radio.

Rouge broke the robot's hand into pieces, freeing herself.

"Manny's headed your way! Call Amy and get her to check on the other kids!" Rouge said, dodging the robot's other hand.

"WHAT?! Why ME?!" Tails said, loudly.

"I'm busy, that's why!" Rouge said, loudly.

"I am too, ya' know!" Tails said, loudly.

"Yeah, but you're Sonic's best friend! She'll go easier on you!!" Rouge said.

Tails hesitated.

"Yeah, well... Fine! I'll tell her!" Tails said, and cut off the radio.

Rouge sighed quietly.

"I wonder how she'll re-..." Rouge wondered to herself, then was interrupted.

"HE WHAT!?!" Amy yelled loudly, from about 35 yards away.

"Yep, I thought she'd react like that." Rouge said quietly to herself.


   MEANWHILE: Manny was running up to a large robot, and kicked it in the head.


Another red robot turned in Manny's direction, eyes lighting up.

"Enemy detected. Searching for identification..." The robot said,

"Huh?" Manny asked confused, turning after the robot he kicked fell over.

"Enemy identified: Sonic the Hedgehog. Tracker missiles initiated." The robot said, missiles coming out of its chest and resting on its shoulders.

"Uh-oh..." Manny said, a sweat drop appearing on the side of his head.

"Firing missiles." The robot said, lighting on of the missiles.

"RUN!!" Manny yelled to himself.

"Manny!" Cream yelled, watching the scene with binoculars.

Amy grabbed the binoculars from Cream and looked through them, looking for Manny.

"Why doesn't he just ride it like Sonic?" Muscles asked, quietly.

"He doesn't know how to yet!" Lara-su said loudly, looking worried.

Manny ran around a large rock (about 6x5), causing the missile to crash into it.

The second missile circled the rock at the last second, following Manny's path.

"We've gotta do something!" Amy yelled, starting to run toward the stairs.

Cream grabbed Amy's arm, stopping her.

"You'd never get there in time, and we can't have you getting into the same situation!" Cream said, loudly.

Amy jerked her arm away, but stayed where she was, looking down.

"That idiot had to go run off at a time like this..." She mumbled.


                       MEANWHILE: Manny was still running from the missile.


'This thing just doesn't give up!' He thought.

Manny spotted a 50 foot robot several yards away.

He watched the robot walk and got an idea.

Manny turned and headed toward the robot.

'Maybe... if I time it right, I can get that to crush the missile with it's foot!' He thought.

Sure enough, Manny raced toward the robot and the missile passed under the foot as it came down, crushing the missile and causing part of the 50 foot robot to explode.

Manny was knocked to the ground by some debris, and was knocked out.

The rest of the robot started to collapse on top of Manny, but a blur of blue scooped him up just in time.

Manny slowly opened his eyes, as he was being carried.

"Dad!" He said, surprised.

"Hey, buddy. Got yourself into some trouble, huh?" Sonic said, eyes slightly narrowed, but smiling.

Manny laughed nervously.

"Don't worry, I'm not mad... but I bet your mother is." Sonic said, a sweat-drop appearing on the side of his head.

"That's not good..." Manny and Sonic said, quietly.

Sonic ran up the stairs to the dug out in the mountain where Amy and the other were.

"Manny!" Amy yelled, teary eyed as she took him from Sonic.

She held Manny tightly, rocking him slightly.

Amy glared at Sonic.

"He gets it from you!" She said, in a low tone.

Sonic laughed nervously.

"Uh, we can talk about that later. We've got some robots to deal with." Sonic said.

"It's about time you showed up faker!" Shadow said, loudly as he ran passed, dropping Kaji off with the others.

Manny laughed quietly.

"Looks like I'm not the only one in trouble today." He said to Kaji, and noted the scratched from the fights

with the robots he'd been in.

"Shut up." Kaji said, turning away and crossing his arms.


MEANWHILE: Shadow and Sonic ran through the robots, toward Eggman's floating fortress.


"You'd think Eggman wouldn't risk his family like this. If something went wrong, it could go very wrong." Sonic said.

"The Doctor probably doesn't think about that." Shadow said.

"Well, Sonic and Shadow are headed here." Eggman said, looking at one of the monitors on a near by desk.

"Great..." Eggmande said, sarcastically.

Elli cooed in the background.

"Get 'em, get 'em!" She said, happily.

"Crazy little..." Eggmande mumbled.

"Eat!" Elli said loudly, and pointed to Eggmande.

"Not again!" Eggmande said, starting to run as the robot dog started to chase him.

Elli laughed, watching Eggmande run down the hall and heard a door slam.

"Elli's too smart for her own good." Elise said, standing next to Eggman.

"She gets it from me. I did things like that all the time when I was in school." Eggman said, with a grin.

"Really? You never told me that." Elise said, with a confused look on her face.

"Never came up." Eggman said, typing on the controls in front of him.

Meanwhile: Shadow and Sonic were outside Eggman's robot.

The two heard a loud creaking sound and saw one of the giant robot's arms move toward them.

"What's he doing now?" Sonic asked himself.

The robot's hand formed a fist and the two hedgehogs heard a fuse ignite.

"Uh-oh, that's not good..." Sonic said, in a low tone.

"That's one way to put it." Shadow said, jumping up and slicing the robots arm, causing the hand to launch.

"Hey!" Sonic said, jumping on top of the hand as it headed toward him.

"You can handle that easily! Don't complain!" Shadow yelled, looking over his shoulder at Sonic.

"Easy for you to say! YOU knew it was coming!" The blue hedgehog yelled back.

Shadow headed for the robots other arm, detaching the hand before it could light the fuse.

The black and red hedgehog sliced through the robots 'stomach', causing a series of small explosions.

'Perfect. Those alarms must be going crazy by now.' Shadow thought.


MEANWHILE: Elise picked up a crying Elli as the alarms blared in the background.


"Of course Shadow'd know to make the alarms go off first..." Eggman mumbled to himself, punching a few buttons on the computer in front of him.

The alarms stopped as the rest of the robot separates from the control room.

"Finally giving up?" Eggmande asked, walking back into the room.

"No, I'm not EVER giving up! It's just not worth the risk to stay at this point." Eggman said.

The rest of the robot crumbles to the ground, as Sonic and Shadow run back to the rest of the group, Tails'

plane flying behind them.

"I'd say we have about two weeks before he causes any more problems." Sonic said.

"More like two months." Shadow said.

"What?! Not likely. I would know, I've fought with him a lot longer then you have." Sonic said, with a smug grin.

"That maybe so, but I've fought on his side before. I know how his schemes work better then you." Shadow said.

"Don't you think Eggman would've change his planning process by now?" Sonic asked, his smile fading slightly.

"Not likely..." Shadow said, running faster.

"Hey! Get back here! That's not an answer!" Sonic said loudly, running to catch up with Shadow.

"Guys don't fight! We just FINISHED fighting Eggman, I don't want to referee you too!" Tails said in a pleading tone.

"I second that!" Rouge said in an exasperated tone, riding on one of the plane's wings.

"We're not fighting." Shadow said.

"Sonic!" Amy yelled to him, from a distance.

"Uh-oh..." Sonic said, skidding to a halt as he got closer to the mountain dug out.

'She sounds mad...' He thought.

Amy charged toward Sonic, and tackled him to the ground.

"That pager's getting a loud speaker this time!" Amy said, hugging Sonic.

"Yeah, that might be a good idea." Sonic said, rubbing Amy's back.

The kids and parents were reunited and after some planning to meet up again, the group went their separate ways.


                                      Lara-su:
                         We might be kids for now...


                                      Muscles:
                  But we're gonna grow up some day.


                                          Kaji:
               Unfortunately, so will Elli and Eggmande.


                                       Manny:
                           We'll be ready for 'em!


                                Sonia and Marine:
                                         Yeah!!
©2008-2009 ~SonamynShadmaria
:iconsonamynshadmaria:

Author's Comments

WELL, THAT CONCULED THE "If Elise was Evil" STORY. BUT, KEEP THE KIDS IN MIND... THERE'S A SEQUAL IN THE WORKS.

IT'S ACTUALLY GOING TO BE A TIE-IN SEQUAL WITH MY "Maria and Shadow: A ShadMaria Story". SINCE MY ShadMaria STORY ISN'T DONE YET, IT'LL BE A WHILE BEFORE THE SEQUAL IS UP... :(

I HOPE YOU ENJOYED THE STORY!!!

R&R PLEASE!!!


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once your done with your sequel can you do a story in which Metal Sonic attacks but grabs all the Chaos Emeralds and Sonic and others failed to defeat him but their kids has gotta find a way to destroy the nightmare that their parents has to face

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Without dark and light life will be destroyed and life is fair its fate that unfair. Why? Life creates and kills things and it let the challanges and obsticles while being alive to fate
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awesome job i can't wait to see what happens next!!

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